Monday, July 16, 2012

A Morning In An Indian Village Comments

Rating: 4.8

Rising sun in the horizon
a fireball in space
like a bride of first night
blushing and gushing
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

Indian village scenes are ever very beautiful and highly cultured. Village children in open space play and get teachings too. Village has its charm of course. At morning in far horizon behind mountains we see sunrise. Sunflowers and mustard flowers bloom in fields. Village ponds shine getting sun rays. A rich culture is observed in this brilliant poem...10

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Tribhawan Kaul 16 October 2017

Thank you dear poet for visiting my page and for your expressive comment on my poem. Happy reading and writing.

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Tom Allport 01 June 2017

a insightful poem of the daily goings on in the poets home town? ........wonderfully written.

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Valsa George 20 August 2013

A medley of scenes, pleasant and bitter! But this rustic life has its own charm where no one is a stranger, with innocent people ready to welcome anyone into their fold, where animals and people co- habit and where people of all religions live in amity! A clear picture of an Indian village!

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Heather Wilkins 27 June 2013

Nice image of life in an Indian village. Enjoyed the read

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Heather Wilkins 27 June 2013

Nice imagery of a morning in an Indian village. Enjoyed the read

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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