Wednesday, August 9, 2006

A Moonlit Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Too early for some, too late for others
Even the many stars were dulled
With the lake below, a sullen thing
But then the moon arose
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

This one reminds me of Leo Tolstoy's writings. You really captured the scene in this one. If that author where alive today, he would be praising this one. GOOD, GOOD, GOOD, I do say.

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Dr.Subhendu Kar 21 September 2006

quite interesting poem, i like its scenic beauty of amoonlit nigt.it is really rare. kindly go through my poem, the grimacing rain

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Sylvia Spencer 20 September 2006

Marilyn what a beautiful poem you must have got so much inspiration from such a beautiful night. I often like to watch the sun go down and a Norfolk sunset is one of the best in the world. Your poem and my sunset were made for each other. Cheers Sylvie. (I have written apoem caled 'Twilight' you may like to read it some time)

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Arti Chopra 20 September 2006

lovely poem....Marilyn can evoke the beauty of a moonlit night........ and thank you for your comments on my poem. happy writing arti

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