Friday, January 16, 2009

*** A Moon Of Love -Haiku *** Comments

Rating: 4.9

Moon in satin while veil
sees reflection in groom’s eye-
blushes like morn’s sun
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ANJALI SINHA
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A moon that shines like tha sun.

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all the three were excellent and beautiful

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Ken E Hall 14 June 2009

Each one melts into each other so good I am moonstruck the work is excellent +++++++10. regards avanice1

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 June 2009

wonderful haiku's composed altogether on the moon..10 up.

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Ken E Hall 16 May 2009

Wow a trio of what goes on in the moonlight written with such class a delight at night+++++++10 Regards uavanice1

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Obinna Eruchie 15 May 2009

that is a nice haiku you have written on the moon with beautiful images.

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Vinod Ak 14 May 2009

Lovely Haiku! ! ! ! Great Imagination! ! 10+++

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anurag duggal 11 May 2009

Moon Clouds and romance lovely write :)

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Aashish Ameya 11 May 2009

full of mysteries...nice Hikus

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Isaiah Grey 10 May 2009

I love the idea behind these three haiku. Beautifully written, evocative and yet leaving so much to our imagination. Job well done.

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 28 April 2009

Dear A njali., Though not exactly in Haiku form, you have marvellously expressed the the three parts of the night where love falls thru moonbeams.Perfect choice of words, imageries depicting a marraige night through the shy eyes of the bride.Evening, late night and early hours before the sun rises. To me its a trilogy completing a poem A

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Allemagne Roßmann 12 April 2009

The moon in satin will be there to smile As the knight dies for her veils of the night The morn's sun is back to shine As the knight clears the dark clouds from its terrain The dark clouds are gone and so did all silhouette of veils They took the knight in some nocturnal wee hours As the night shook them far away away and away across the oceans, waning on mountains unknown far away in the galaxy fired all vulgar vulpine vies and vexations When the knight turned back he just smiled Not beause he is also unison of a vie But he lost the way he came for his one, one loving cutipie An wonderful imagination and i hope they become truth for your part of equator.A 10 from me.

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Anuj Trikha 06 April 2009

hey, after reading ur poem i am feeling the beauty of moon and sun from a very closer side, .ur poem is stunning, and it will make me to feel this glorious beuty forever.NICE job anjali

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Meggie Gultiano 17 March 2009

a very very nice Haiku

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Srujini M 17 February 2009

this is one more dimension of looking and thinking creatively on and about moon, Moon has always drawn the attention of the poets of all ages. this is a very delicate way of loving and living with the moon in a moonlit night.thanx

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 February 2009

Haiku with cute flavor, love it and 10+++

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Ajith Patnaik 02 February 2009

showed us the moon thru ur write. very nice.

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Aijaz Asif 30 January 2009

wow...bravo again anju....you amaze me everytime i read your marvellous poems and i feel confused to choose which one is perfect cause everyone of each is more perfect then other....100++++++ rgds asif

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Andrew Blakemore 29 January 2009

Three most wonderful haiku that speak unto my heart. Just so beautiful Anjali. Best wishes, Andrew

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Duncan Wyllie 29 January 2009

STUNNING! Dew melting softly Sighs in bluish moonlight- kisses feet of svelte lass Well done with this finely accomplished piece Love duncan X

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