A Monsoon Song Comments
There dwell those droves in a number few,
Within a stone's throw, the rainbow of bliss,
And in each glance shall reveal colors, new,
With drizzles apart, like arrows with kiss,
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Saheb, a worthy soonet. This is a shakespearean. Nice to read and feel the thoughts expressed.
A well knit poem which arises the touch of Monsoon. I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep writing.
Loved your colourful monsoon sonnet. I expect to see more sonnets from you. So keep on writing.
To all high lakes at earth's blue chest, It's what you say the beauty at its best. Thought provoking imagination and imagery makes this beautiful poem on sharing. Nicely penned.
Beautiful poem enriched with nature's beauty. Fantastic lines... To all high lakes at earth's blue chest, It's what you say the beauty at its best. Loved reading it.
great write....well done like it....horses of joy riding o'er the lakes,
Great Nature description! Yes, Beauty at its best can be perceived in many objects of Nature! Lovely write!
beautifully written....your poem has got the rhyming factor too....keep it up...god bless you...
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7/23/2025 5:17:30 AM # 1.0.0
Oh yes splendid imagery! Each vision complimented the one yet to be read. Line by line. Wave by wave. I agree with the cricket's praise...............10