Saturday, July 19, 2014

A Monkey On The Roof Comments

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There came a monkey on the roof
he had this raised in his mind
long stayed in the jungle aloof
was time he met his superior kind.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Very inspiring and full of morals for today's human beings.................very well composed

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Dinesan Madathil 21 July 2014

The way we lose respect for our ancestors, man is turning detrimental to his super predecessor. This monkey will teach the man a lesson perhaps.

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Valsa George 21 July 2014

Poor monkey.... the people should have shown a little more kindness to their ancient ancestor! It is a pleasure watching monkeys from close quarters....! An interesting write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2014

A thoughtful write. People don't accept one as friend very easily. They dont try to read others intention properly.. In this process they may loose a true friend too, which could have been. In this process of some change which a monkey thought got only thrashing and finally lost even his way to home....Even if one go out, one should keep the track on way back home...Loved the way you presented it.

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