Monday, June 17, 2013

A Monkey Of My Apple Tree Comments

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we are just familiar with our great ancestors
who taught us a way to lead this beautiful life
and we are ultimately losing their faith
are we leading the life the way they imagined
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Vishal Sharma
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Vishal Sharma 16 October 2015

thought provoking poetry

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Hazel Durham 17 June 2013

Soul searching for truth and goodness and to stamp out the awful decay that is hate! Hate breeds misery and evil to destroy ourselves in the end! An excellent write!

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Payal Parande 17 June 2013

If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other. Mother Teresa beautiful thinking Vishal just keep your thoughts running like that and you'll be a fine writer one day

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Farah Ilyas 17 June 2013

wao what a metaphorical use of virus, monkey & tree, virus of hypocrisy, envy & prejudice spoiling the innocence & our beliefs...well done Vishal u created very thought provoking poem

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Survi Sharma 17 June 2013

nice sentiment i like it very much great write vishal

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