Take me back in time
Open my timeless capsule of
your soul
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Hi Bonnie and this was truly an enchanting read and it had a very warm touch to it. I enjoyed, Loyd
Bonnie this is, as every single poem you have, one extraordinary piece of art. It is a shot poem with such a beautiful meaning. a hundred out of ten for this.... well i cant vote 100 so i'll just vote ten. haha lol XD
Bonnie, so true. It is in moment only that we live several births, can dig timeless capsule from the unfathomable depth of our hearts and traverse millions of miles on this bank and shoal of time. A Moments Escape is a master sroke from the pen of a great poet.
a write romantic, dignified...beautiful use of words...i liked 10
Bonnie, Sometimes that's all we need to escape - only a moment. Lovely verse here - a charming write! Robert
What a truly beautiful poem. Sometimes to only escape for a time.. This is such a romantic piece..
Refreshing and nostalgic at the same time *10*. Be Well, Nate
Hi Bonnie. a well thought out piece and a pleasure to read. Regards Dave T.
I like your poem. It's a fine write. Good job. Keep going.
Hmmmmm, Now that has turned into a brain teaser. Nicely written. Keep goin. Dont you know we are eager for your words. Take Care and be safe Tracker
This is a lovely poem Bonnie, great opening lines and a nice twist at the end. Well done. Andrew x '10'
Bonnie, after the power of the opening lines you could almost have echoed da di da to the end. A sparing but potent memory. Rgds, Ivan
This is a beautiful poem with a lovely old fashioned feel to it.
really good poetry. loved it