Friday, February 6, 2009

A Moments Bliss Comments

Rating: 3.8

As I walked passed you today
as we accidentaly ran into one
another, made a feeling inside
of me, feel like time had stood still
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Bonnie Collins
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time waltzed in, brilliant

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Laurie Hill 18 April 2009

What a lovely touching poem of something never quite lost......10+

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 March 2009

A blissful collision. A beautiful poem, Bonnie......10. Regards Naseer

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James Nall 18 February 2009

excellent, bonnie.to the heart

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 17 February 2009

Good morning Bonnie and I enjoyed this true love poem and it reminded me of Hank Williams Sr. song 'I Can't Help It But I'm Still In Love With You' A good read, I enjoyed. LOyd PS Thank you for all of your reviews of my work previously as well. LOyd

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James B. Earley 17 February 2009

The eyes really do tell the story! Please read 'A Saint Valentine....Moment.'

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Irene Clark-hogg 16 February 2009

Lovely! I enjoyed your poem. Irene

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Vaibhav Pandey 14 February 2009

very soothing piece....you write with great simplicity...I love your style

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I have been there. I have felt this chill.. this piece rung truth

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Scarlet Romantika 13 February 2009

Very pretty piece a true romantic treasure. Beautiful.

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You captured the moment of bliss with words that were just so appropriate and full of meaning. These words 'the twinkle traveling to the walls of my heart' the way you placed the word 'waltzed' worked beautifully. As always Bonnie, a very lovely poem. Karin Anderson

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Barry A. Lanier 08 February 2009

the writer so eloquently captures the essence of the moment....this carried me back some 15 years ago when I wrote one of my first poems ' Moment in The Morn' which focused also on the essence of the moment..hope you find an opportunity to peruse it..it is still posted on my site thanks for sharing

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Stacey Watts 08 February 2009

Wow i am glad I am reading your work tonight. Your words always put me in the right frame of mind to write. I love to write romantic things. Your words are always beautiful.

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Krishna Baalu 08 February 2009

Touching poem short but packed with rich content. 'two hearts engaged in a....bliss' well said Bonnie Krishna Baalu

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Kesav Easwaran 07 February 2009

'two hearts engaged in a moments bliss'...beautiful expression, Bonnie...pleasing...i liked this piece...10

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Andrew Blakemore 07 February 2009

Excellent as always Bonnie, as pure as a mountain stream, a truly beautiful write. Love, Andrew xx

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Ana Zaldivar 06 February 2009

WOW bonnie, this is beautiful.. a moment bliss.. magnificent.. Love it as all of your poetry. love ana

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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