Tuesday, July 3, 2018

A Moment Without You- 01 Comments

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Here I am
Living with my heart
that has been beating
in a never-ending way,
...
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Sabita Sahoo 07 November 2020

Whenever I gaze far at the end of my horizons I feel my recurring breaths have never lived a life with you... Wow Sir..what a beautiful line and it mesmerizes the reader. All stars to you dear poet.

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Dharitri moharana 11 February 2019

Sir this is a amazing poem . The lines whenever l gaze ...moment without you are wonderful.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 30 October 2018

It is a nice poem.music of rivers flowing downhill upon a curvy path the line is so nice. Thank you sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2018

It is a brilliant poem on life and nature having fantastic expression with nice collocation. I wish to quote some lines here...... Resonating to the music of rivers flowing downhill upon the curvy paths where the pebbles of past collide with stone bed of life deep underneath, eternally fearlessly weathered. Thanks for sharing.10

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Thanks for your kind remarks clad with your blessings and inspirations after such a long time. Regards Subhas

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