A Moment With A Night Comments

Bars were full of dancing souls Floors were humming with singing girls.....The last verse of your poem attracted me very much..there exists only nothingness.. wonderful. tony

Beautiful poetry.

So much said about the empty fun....there's no joy in this partying.....here u almost feel the depressing ambience of a pub...Thank You Sir...

Party animals suffer from nothingness. Excellent observation. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

'Guests were drunk with the melting beauty of girls. The night invites me to move' Rachel Ann Butler

Bars were full of dancing souls I love that line... good job. very good. like it a lot. *Purkey Girl*

A moment is just a moment if there's nobody with significance When the only one shows up A moment could be eternity

It is a beautiful work derived from wit and experience.10 for it.

A well written poem on night 10+++++++

Splendid read Ershad! A moment with a night to find Paradise and to unwind Inviting as it seemed to be A nothingness - is all you see Best regards! *10*! ! Friend Thad

O the night is beautifully composed, love it.10++

Ahh, , , 'melting beauty of girls'.....good night Ershad, , you enjoying yourself thses days, ,10++

A wonderful title. And you have captured the night with all of its magic and mystery.Ten from me. Warm regards, Sandra

a rendevous with night, Ershad, this is succinctly put, as Rebekah says, impressive. Regards Mamta

This poem is a teacup full of the condition of human being. I'm very impressed.