Friday, September 14, 2018

A Moment White Comments

Rating: 5.0

(for snow)

You lit upon the land one night,
a night of drifting lightness
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John Beaton
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 August 2018

John, you have so wonderfully created a persona of a 'superincumbent white expressed as a lintel of brightness. The slow and gradual transition of the snow from the pure to the tri-footprints, then a track, a crack into a creek.... on to icicles and waterfalls. An imagery par excellence! The philosophy - everything in this world changes! .....10

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John Beaton 28 August 2018

Thanks for the fine review and interpretation, Geeta. Indeed, it all changes, and water more than most things.

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Paul Brookes 27 August 2018

Beautiful piece very atmospheric Descriptive Muffles like a blanket overlay on overlay white and silent falling Enjoyed this I shall add it to my favourites

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John Beaton 27 August 2018

Thanks, Paul. You've interpreted it very nicely.

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