Thursday, July 23, 2020

A Moment's Wait And… Comments

Rating: 5.0

Failed for long to hold
And the life fell down.
A frown on face showed,
Pride had lost the crown.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kostas Lagos 24 July 2020

A sad poem.But a well written one!

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Juliet L Languedoc 24 July 2020

Thanks for the reminder of reality.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 July 2020

OH! Reality of the concrete world defeats the life which wanna live in fantasy!

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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