A Moment's Triumph! Comments

Flowing lines, descriptive phrases-Well done!

Illusion too worthless to be revised Or too destructive demanding revolution within the self Trascending into broader sphere very next moment.... Very excellent.....cheers with 10+++

those little moments is what finally makes life's journey worthwhile well said...deep layers of meaning in here

Sometimes for a moment feeling penetrate our souls, Things are no longer as they used to be what a fantstic start of rich poem.. your way of expression is really impressive and logical way of writing.. realistic approach in this poem is making it sweet one... lovely...10/10

Breathe, let go and remind yourself that this very moment is the only one you know and that you have it for sure. One should enjoy the wonderful moments for one they can be so special who never had anyting special in lifetime. A very inspirational poem conveying a message that if one believes so much in life, one would fling oneself less to the moments. So these tiny jolts should be enjoyed.....