Wednesday, July 9, 2014

A Moment Of Love Comments

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When the milky-way smiles on the sky,
And the crazy night birds glide and fly,
The white night flowers when sing and dance,
The corner in roses is a cradle of romance,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 04 March 2017

A wonderful poem..........................................................................

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Heather Wilkins 16 July 2014

a moment of love so beautifully written

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 12 July 2014

An angel wings.. flying in a fairyland.. a poet of love and beauty... thank you bro...

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Neela Nath Das 11 July 2014

A series of fabulous imagery......

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Salini Nair 11 July 2014

awesome..........like it sir

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Colleen Courtney 09 July 2014

Ah! The first stanza of this poem is so very enchanting! Beautifully and vividly descriptive. Wonderful write Akhtar!

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Valsa George 09 July 2014

Beautiful poem Akhtarji..... Your pen is becoming sharper and your imagination takes wings!

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 July 2014

You have captured A Moment of Love beautifully. When love is in air, worries and sorrows are forgotten. Beautiful lines..I just loved reading it.. A moment of love when all is dead, The book of love is opened and read....very true said...Beautiful poem.

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Babatunde Aremu 09 July 2014

Nice write! I like the use of imagery in this poem. Keep on writing. Do read my poems and comment

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