Tuesday, March 30, 2010

A Moment Of Happiness Comments

Rating: 3.2

A moment of happiness,
you and I sitting on the verandah,
apparently two, but one in soul, you and I.
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Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi
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ree tood 08 November 2021

extra chromie homie

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Bharati Nayak 25 February 2021

you and I, with the garden's beauty and the birds singing. The stars will be watching us, and we will show them what it is to be a thin crescent moon.---Wow --How to describe the beauty of this oneness?

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Douglas Scotney 24 February 2021

I think this is a good translation

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 06 February 2021

my favorite from Mr Rumi

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 May 2020

The parrots of heaven will be cracking sugar as we laugh together, you and I. In one form upon this earth, and in another form in a timeless sweet land. marvelous words RUMI JI

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Britte Ninad 23 June 2019

You and I unselfed, will be together, indifferent to idle speculation, you and I./// indeed great

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A poem on love and beauty beautifully put into a poem

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Zainul Ahmed 29 May 2018

Best poem I ever read

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 May 2018

O the greatest ONENESS and love is merged here fully in ONE- sitting on the verandah, apparently two, but one in soul, you and I.

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Chandra Sekhar Batabyal 03 March 2018

An elegant piece of romance beautifully presented.

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sharon 15 December 2017

i have character flaws but scaring me is not the answer //little sharon quiet one

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The moments of happiness likes the poem.

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Chinedu Dike 27 January 2017

Beautiful romantic piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction.

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Gunturu Lakshminarasaiah 27 January 2017

Love to Rumi is both physical and spiritual at once.

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Walterrean Salley 21 November 2016

(A Moment Of Happiness - Poem by Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi.) Love the theme (happiness) , and enjoyed the meter of the poem

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Hans Vr 19 September 2016

Superb lines of unity. Wow

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Jayne Doe 19 September 2016

Apparently two, but one in soul... I love this line.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 19 September 2016

A great poem from the enlightened poet.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 September 2016

A superb narration of the condition of two bodies and one soul achieved by a couple and it's celebrations. Thanks for sharing it here.

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Seamus O Brian 19 September 2016

The zenith of love's aspiration: the true unity of two souls. How difficult this really is, in the complicated reality of everyday living outside of poetry and movies. The sublimation of one's self into the higher self of two souls united. Certainly poetry such as this lovely piece will continue to hold the beauty of such an ideal up to the light of consideration for romantic souls to aspire.

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