Saturday, June 6, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Moment In Time! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.6

Summer at peak;
a young man
in a white singlet.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 June 2009

truely poetic word-picure! insightul beauty here! 10+

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Raj Nandy 12 June 2009

The poem reflects a slice of realism, - indeed the summer in Delhi is at its peak! And the forecast is that every year this heat will gradually rise due to global warming! Alarming! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Sandra Fowler 11 June 2009

The imagery of summer.I can feel the warmth. But where do all those moments go? The leaves will be falling before you know it. Very nostalgic, Mamta. As always, Sandra

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Vidi Writes 08 June 2009

Summer at peak But you come up with this juicy greet Each word i pick With great devotion to marinate. Wow... i feel... let this poem don't end Let many more lines come in blend A joy ride with great append. Thank you dear poet for this wonderful write.

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trueli at it's peak......

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Subroto Chatterjee 06 June 2009

Please write one on: 'Monsoon at peak'....Quick, quick! ! You know why Mamta...The heat is getting on... Cheers. Subroto

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Saadat Tahir 06 June 2009

hi mamta...u r very kind and partial to the sizzling summers nice poetic conect very nice lines cheers

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Sandra Martyres 06 June 2009

Lovely poetic observations on the expression of Summer for everyone...good write summer...

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Marieta Maglas 06 June 2009

''Summer at peak; an infant On inhaler'' just a moment in time 10++

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Bob Blackwell 06 June 2009

Each moment is different for each of us, then it changes. Nice observing Mamta.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

A great poem with summer. You have observed from different corner. Sweet and cute poem with a lovely form.10+++

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