A Moment Can'T Be Forgotten Comments

Sunthla,Jodhpur

So happy that you see the gift of life in the songs of birds, the rainbow and many other wonders. Life should be enjoyed no matter what comes your way. You are a gifted young Poet. Continue to thrive in the wonderful world of poetry. Good.

nice imagery. Some moments can never forgotten. nice ink

Yes we have to grab these moments and really treasure them. And as you've pointed out, it's often the simplest things that touch us the most.

NIce, beautiful imagry!

Nothing like a sunrise to show God's painting abilities in nature

very far imagination.nice poem

Nice imaginations and nice write-up. Keep it up.

i love the use of imagery, creating that image makes a moment just reading it.

You picturised a wonderful dawn. Pls read and comment on my new write, 'Dearly loved, do you hear me? ', Thanks, Sam

I think your poetry has a very rhythmic flow to it, and I like it quite a lot.

Wow! love it your awesome, you have talent keep! I love the way you express yourself thru poetry....fantastic

heyy itz rly vry nice with a spiritual connect! :) jus squeeze in some tym n check out mine..

poems like this makes me feel good about myself lol ;) awesome work! !

what a beautiful thought, ....it makes u imagine every bit of it....keep up the good work.....and keep updating us with more poems.....

Yeah............. its really nice one.... nicely presented also

this is a really good poem keep writing

this was great short and sweet

beautiful description abdallah! ! :)

That was amazing: D the imagery is simply wonderful.it pains a vivid image of waking up to a world where everything is good. Keep on writing my friend (: