A Moment Comments

dear shamik.....it is my first poem....of yours, and i liked it instantly because these moments give us a lifetime of happiness or pain.you write beautifully well! god bless you. ritty

What love can't ever be enshrin'd when a lover's silent wish makes a star to fall in one blinding dream of desire it twinkles in a lover's heart for ever! ...nice lines....a very readable verse...

very nice and interesting but sad. thanks for sharing.

What love can't ever be enshrin'd when a lover's silent wish makes a star to fall in one blinding dream of desire to twinkle in a lover's heart for ever! This is a beautiful poem with a fine touch of sadness, twinkling in dreams and desires. Regards Naseer

super. a good piece of poetic writing. the last line is my favorite.