A moment indulged rough-and-tumble,
A new frustration bloomed
As a kite cut off when swing on air
Sandbars cut in the velocity of river
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(Hand clapping) its just something about this poem i love, or maybe its how you set up the words to have a deeper meaning...i don't know what it is but please, never stop writing: D
Nicely represent the moment. very lovely write. well imagery. i liked the perception.