Just a moment.
Yes, a moment in time,
A moment in your day,
A moment in your life.
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Sir, it is so sweet, it is so true. A moment is a complete saga of life in itself, enjoy it or kill it. Regards, CP
You almost succeeded in catching the moment for a moment. Great piece.
i had just read another poem that states that the true present is but a nano-second! ...everything else after that has become the past....
“To act, create to grieve, to cry to smile, to laugh. to love, to hate.” “Its past, it’s gone it’s not alive its dead, it’s done. So leave it now.” And the moment is now past. Excellent..............10...........
A moment in time may last a lifetime! in a little moment's chime i made this short rhyme. Hey Bob, have you ever considered being a scriptwriter for movies.
Great poem, Bob. The talent is to take the mundane the inconceived and shed light. Love it! !
Yes, every second is a passing moment..why to brood then..great10
Ah yes! A moment in time... Hard to grasp and hard to hold onto. Great poem! God bless us poets all-MJG.
Learn with the moment gone past to live in the next one. You have conveyed a very philosophical and meaningful thought in such a light way......Well Done Bob.....10/10.
living in the present moment- mindfully and in happiness. lovely. life is made of moments. don't live in the past, who knows about future. now is the moment. Mamta
A poem full of life and realisation. It's about just enjoying life with the time we have. Not to grasp, hold or attach but just touch and when the time comes, let the moment fly. A moment in our life. Wow! I love your poem. A hundred marks!
From ' do not grasp to do not hold ' - is the very essence of philosophy of life! Since you have realised it & expressed the same, you have also become a philosopher poet! 10! -Raj Nandy
Bob! Don't think I am flattering u. But this is pure classic, in content, structure and expression........a great piece..
A beautiful description of the moments which make up life. Each one a precious opportunity and you remind us so well. Thank you Bob. Greetings from Fay Slimm in Cornwall U, K,
I have spent many moments in your company whilst reading your poetry and have left those moments now behind but the pleasure gained will remain for some time yet.
Just a moment would mince all the illusions..just a moment would speak for thankfullness..just a sweet moment.......Very nicely composed..reaches the heart and makes us think about all the moments which were special or could have been...but its past now...a really touchy thing for me..thanks Gul
Great! Just what I think of the life!