Sunday, December 18, 2011

A Mom’s Delight Comments

Rating: 3.5

As I stared outside, listening to the rain song
When you finally announced its time for you to come along
You came like fresh air, with rosy lips n cotton candy hair
I saw u smile n cry, watched you sleep as I sang a lullaby
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Joy Jacob 12 March 2014

Excellent poem. So beautifully written, it brings out emotions to the full.

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Blossom Mist 09 March 2014

Thanks Rose and Jas for liking the poem! !

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Jasbir Chatterjee 06 March 2014

Wow! I simply loved this poem...

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Bing Hua 05 March 2014

I am glad to read your poem. So sweet!

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Rupa Gogoi 13 March 2012

really sweet poem...

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Blossom Mist 08 January 2012

Thanks a lot Kee Thampi, I wrote it for someone really close to me! ! and it was for her Baby only! !

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Kee Thampi 06 January 2012

the sparkle of your teeth, the dimple of your cheek The twinkle in your eye, made my sorrows fly Oh when you spoke on the day of June, I said to myself, my baby grew so soon The way we walked, n as we play with the big red bunny or soft clay The big plans, the small talks, to lift a mount, or write with chalks The time flies by and we bask in a shimmering hue Each day with you becomes a memory so rare n true real to wording...nice poem

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Blossom Mist 29 December 2011

it was actually written for someone very dear to me.. Thanks

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