Tuesday, January 19, 2016

A Modern Truth Comments

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A girl I once knew of beauties born,
But poison was she, and full of scorn.
The heart was right and depth within
But shallowness was all that shone.
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Daniel Bates
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Howard Savage 22 January 2016

Great poem of beauty and emotional truth.

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Soul Watcher 20 January 2016

Nice poems. True love when hearts speak before tongues. Keep Up!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 January 2016

Simple loving and caring is wonderful in this drafting. Wisely penned poem shared on.10

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Daniel Bates 19 January 2016

Thank you kindly for your comment. I have read many, and felt inspired by some of your poems.

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