A Modern Paradise! Comments
Rotating sprinkler spraying water over green lawns,
Colourful flowers fully bloomed dancing by breeze,
The buildings standing in sophisticated models, I feel
As if I am stranded in paradise with none besides me!
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We can only enjoy artificially created Paradise. Thought well penned .thanks for sharing
Wonderful imagery. So nicely depicted. Thanks for sharing.
Very well written, i liked it.............10 If you find time please review my poems. Thanks.
Thank you for your good comment and I do what you say when I get time!
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7/26/2025 5:02:37 AM # 1.0.0
Sans natural surrounding, it will be a concrete jungle....true dear poet.