Friday, September 21, 2007

A Mockingbird, It Isn'T Comments

Rating: 4.9

It isn’t much I’ve seen,
just a couple sunsets
in the great grand
scheme of things.
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Ben Partenay
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Stephanie Saba 23 September 2008

Nicely written! :) Keep writing!

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 June 2008

I would have given this poem a 7, if it had been written by someone else. But, I gave it a 9 for you. You are a superior talent. It doesn't always appear, and frankly it can't, in a poem as vague as this one. The reader doesn't know this, and perhaps they never will. But I do, and therefore I have to be honest to your ability. I'll read another. We'll see about it. GW62

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Sandra Fowler 03 October 2007

Very poignant. You are in good poetic voice in this one. Praise for your talented pen. Warm regards, Sandra

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Goldy Locks 01 October 2007

ben, feeling it... Great stuff. keep on, sjg

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