Wednesday, October 19, 2005

A Mob Of Yesterdays Comments

Rating: 4.7

If you turn from the midnight window, they
peek in. Look, all you see is the shakened
branch, grasping at wind. Yet the past will say
why stars tremble. You, when awakened,
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Glenn Bagshaw
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Moon Batchelder 31 August 2006

very intense...love the a ghost would...you should...rhyme in the middle...drawing attention to things that linger invisible... like yesterday...very nice

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Lucy Giardino 06 December 2005

Glen... As you said, 'I seem to pass through things, ' as we all do. However, when we do, we seem to always carry that extra bagage we can't seem to get rid of. I thought the subtext in this piece was suburb.

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