Saturday, August 6, 2022

A Misunderstood Brother Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unclenched yr fist
Remove that gun
Why do you want to stab me?
You're only fourteen
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Indira Renganathan 11 August 2022

An apt poem for a teenager....5*****

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Nabakishore Dash 07 August 2022

A good consolation dear LeeAnn in genuine words.

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Anjandev Roy 06 August 2022

Wisely penned.....very effective....thank u, dear poetess....

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Richard Wlodarski 06 August 2022

LeeAnn, this is S-o-o-o Very Well Written. You're speaking to him at his level, so that he fully understands the seriousness of his crime. And at the same time, he can feel how empathetic you are towards him. I can't stress enough how masterfully you've written this poem!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 August 2022

Wonderful dear LeeAnn. I liked this poem on violence. Top score.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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