Unclenched yr fist
Remove that gun
Why do you want to stab me?
You're only fourteen
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LeeAnn, this is S-o-o-o Very Well Written. You're speaking to him at his level, so that he fully understands the seriousness of his crime. And at the same time, he can feel how empathetic you are towards him. I can't stress enough how masterfully you've written this poem!
Wonderful dear LeeAnn. I liked this poem on violence. Top score.
An apt poem for a teenager....5*****