A Misty Dawn Comments

Indeed an amazing poem....with every poem of yours you set an example for how to meditate on poetry...no doubt you are the queen of description as Aktarji says...kudos

ITS A DELIGHT READING YOUR POETRY ALL POETS READ THEE THEY HAVE NO TIME FOR ME WELL DONE VALSAJI

A misty dawn is very nice and beautiful poem shared really. Against the hazy sky it creates very wonderful imagery.

An amazing description, Valsa is queen of description.....................10

A highly creative piece from a masterful poet. This is one of my favourites. Thanks

Mysty dawn the exact happenings of the dawn in a mysty atmosphere and its great imaginations are actual realities of the same feelings in a hill station.

I will say it highly extraordinary.........Valsa.....so beautifully imagined and put to life Nature in a canvas I feel so.... and in very soulful words................prfound

Phenomenal! Keep it up.

Phenomenal! Keep it up.

a swt melodious with beautiful write that jingles the soul.

a beautiful picture of the dawn. loved it, especially the lines-the East bleeds, As shafts of gold cuts through her breast.

A beautiful poem about the dawn. slowly slowly parting curtains the day emerges. nice thought

Wonderfully descriptive, capturing the beauty of dawn. Lovely write Valsa.

Beautiful lines and the crystalised life on a diverse spectrum make this poem a great write, dear Valsa..

What a wonderful depiction of day break! The lines- The leaves are tear stained / By the Night's frozen grief- are really of beautiful imagination.The concluding para' is fantastic! ! Valsa I see your, your mind sparkling with beauty! GREAT! !

Gradually dawn appears breaking the curtain of night. Cinematic.

i like it.my favorite moment of a day is dawn.when the birds chatter as if they are praying the God.even the trees when the dews drip from them.so the message at the end really is awakening. a masterpiece of art. Kudos~nb

wonderful description. I felt to read it in one go. imagery is suggestive and strong message delivered. The rooster, in sharp notes Sounds the siren. The East bleeds, and then the comparison. The day emerges Like a lazy boy Beautiful.

a lovable poem on our life, like a lazy boy we love to live here on this lovely land of God And down they drip one by one As the grass below shiver At the sudden shock. The leaves, rid of the load, flutter-