Wednesday, August 21, 2013

A Mistress To Her Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see you in my rear view, as you settle to make the call
Covering the delay, with a well-worn blanket of lies…
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Leria Hawkins
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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 October 2021

I revisit your poemsite and reread. Grandest end rhymes in this poem, and an excellent story has been built up, truly a most pleasurable read, my highest compliments for you, this poem is saddest but PH is a tremendous place to present this loveliest touching oem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 August 2021

Excellently worded poem, a very pleasant read, I have enjoyed this fascinating poem 5 Stars full

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Hannington Mumo 09 August 2021

Another perfectly scintillating opus that sweetly rubbed my quenchless poetry-enchanted palates...kudos, Leira!

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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2019

An insightful work of art nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Leria.

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Anna, with a sigh 24 November 2017

It is both comforting and exhausting to read, in such eloquent clarity and through another's perspective, the pains and pleasures that resonate through my days.

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Original Unknown Girl 03 September 2013

Fabulous! ! You still have the knack Leria! ! x

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