Friday, April 13, 2007

A Missing Star! Comments

Rating: 5.0

In an unending night,
You looked out of your window,
A dim star I was,
But your gaze gave me light.
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Ankur Shrivastava
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Analou Pabalate 22 October 2007

true love hits all don't care about what the two person in love w/ each other......................................................may it be a rich and a poor...........a prince with her kingdom's lovely servant......................love is really powerful. tnxs.

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Preeti - is here! 17 April 2007

Romantic Beyond Words. I esp like this line- In your heart I found a new sky. But i must also add that this poem was too crowded with wonerdful lines...

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Lal Parameswar 16 April 2007

You know, felt like something mystic.Nicely presented.But the last lines a bit confusing, and that was what all you wanted? ! ! ! ! Great! ! !

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