Thursday, February 4, 2016

A Missing Naughty Balloon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mrs. Black Hole, a balloon carrier,
with a long stick resting on her shoulder
held by her left hand,
and a flute in her right hand
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kelly Kurt 04 February 2016

There is only one person I know that can retell the birth of a universe in such a way. Thanks, Akhtar

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Akhtar Jawad 05 February 2016

Thanks Kelly Kurt.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 February 2016

Deep meaning in this piece of art. Thank you for sharing.

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Khalid Saifullah 04 February 2016

Creation of universe nicely explained, leaving a thoughtful question whether it's a cycle.

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Rajnish Manga 04 February 2016

A very profound use of metaphor and the narrative captivate the reader in a romantic sequence. I quote: (A balloon) ....one I am aware of / amorous and looking for a date / unaware of her fate / too innocent / and too ignorant / in search of a flirt / and romance / a song and dance,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 February 2016

Ugliness and beauty will fuse in each other, . Naughty balloon will see the ocean again with respect to universe and this is very amazing definitely.10

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