Tuesday, March 15, 2005

A Missing Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Painted silver top the water,
Waves give movement to the moon,
Skipping rocks while I'm wishing,
For true love to find me soon.
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Ivy Christou 16 March 2005

This is a very touching poem, indeed true love is hard to find. I really like the verse 'Full of life and still I'm empty', it can stand on its own to describe loneliness.. Well done HBH

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