Sunday, April 5, 2009

A Missed Shot Comments

Rating: 3.5

Alien thoughts come to my mind,
Whenever I am afraid of thinking,
You were talking to someone in soft-velvety voice,
And I overheard those magic words;
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Anjali Sinha 12 April 2009

wowwwwwwww thats a good one here 'You missed a shot' ++10 anjali

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Aijaz Asif 11 April 2009

Hey! Don’t cry over my filthy corpse, You didn’t kill me; It was just, A missed shot - :) bravo, bravo an amazingly beautiful write or i felt it like expressive write and you expressed your feelings here very beautifully.....added to my favs and many 100ssssss for this marvellous piece... ' as I was sitting and playing with my tears the tears turned into words the words which i knead with thoughts are the stories of my falling down ' - asif rgds

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rago rago 06 April 2009

One of the best poem beautifully woven with........

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