A Mishap Comments

So glad to hear you are all ok! It was a very articulately described poem of your tale, fitted into rhyme so well! Thank you for sharing with us!

Oh dear, I fought my tears back. Cars could be the worst enemy of life. Yet here I feel it gave a chance for people to share pure love, such I believe could be the prayers you mentioned here...Thank you for share, glad all of you are ok.

That's very true any day you live, thank the Almighty...u never know which could be your last moment...truly a lesson for those who do not give importance to what they had cz once u lose them at ny instance, you may or may not have it back... than'Q Kelly for appreciating my poems

yeah Adam surely it was a blessing that we are safe and well now Alhamdulillah...and than a loads for appreciating my poem...

What a tramatic event you had when you were young, I am glad it was not so severe that would cause you much pain and sadness... from this was a lesson learned... treat each day as your last, for no one promised you tomorrow. Very good write Sania! ! ! My pleasure! -Kelly.

yeah by the grace of ALMIGHTY ALLAH we are Alhamdolilalh n too read your poem was very sad may ALLAH(SWT) gives us patience….this poem is very close to my heart…thank u tons for appreciating ‘em (-:

a touching vivid scene...so easy to identify with for those who have gone through such trauma... well thought painful lines.... mercifully dint result in lasting damage tc