Sunday, January 5, 2014

A Misery Comments

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So lonely is this life alone
Very painful and pricking is this lonely zone.
None is to stand at your sorrows and pains
No one will share your delights and gains.
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Amitava Sur
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 07 May 2014

interesting poem...this was quite enjoyable

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Yash Shinde 06 April 2014

...loneliness can kill a person from within.............companionship is a boon for humanity.............lovely write...

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Ambrosia A 02 February 2014

So true its no less than a misery to stay alone. But I prefer to be alone than to be with an unwanted person, to lead a loveless, remorseful life, coz its no more a life, then its like living dead. At least you can hope a bright future. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 08 January 2014

A life of loneliness is indeed a misery! To have someone to share our joys and cares is such a relief. If you long for company, at any rate, you should seek it, instead of being locked in your loneliness! A poignant write! !

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Rubab Atwal 08 January 2014

a nice poem, with emotions and thoughts expressed pretty well.enjoyed it

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Roseann Shawiak 05 January 2014

I really liked this poem, but think it would read better if you didn't keep repeating the same line at the end of each verse. It may be easy - saying to stay alone But a misery, in remaining alone. I like the line, but not over and over. You have very good thoughts and a way of expressing them well.

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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