We receive from all around
Only our deeds rebound
Hear we only that thing
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The first two lines are truly philosophical and what more do you need? You have realized the truth!
I like your poem very much, I do like also the melodious ryhme.The meaning of the poem is very great, I really appreciate it.Keep writing! !
Mirror cannot see its own face but shows others' faces-such a selfless device.
Salaaam.. I really liked yr poem.. The words revealing its story itself.. Thanks for sharing.. *Smile4ever*