Friday, April 10, 2009

A Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.0

We receive from all around
Only our deeds rebound

Hear we only that thing
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akram saqib
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*Smile4ever* 07 May 2009

Salaaam.. I really liked yr poem.. The words revealing its story itself.. Thanks for sharing.. *Smile4ever*

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Ravi A 29 April 2009

The first two lines are truly philosophical and what more do you need? You have realized the truth!

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Reem Ehab 11 April 2009

I like your poem very much, I do like also the melodious ryhme.The meaning of the poem is very great, I really appreciate it.Keep writing! !

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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 April 2009

Mirror cannot see its own face but shows others' faces-such a selfless device.

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