A Mirage - Haiku Comments

An excellent haiku- It shows the power of haiku. It portrays all the philosophy of existence...

It is like a parodox. Makes one ponder! : D

a nice 'philosophicku'! thanks...10

Wow! ! Excellent contrast. Existence in nonexistence. But an existent ten. dr.sakti Thanks for comment. Cordially invite to my page. ds

Very good and interesting haiku.10v

A charged observation using minimal words...great write 10

Your haiku always attracts me. I like it very.10v.real DA

This life in this world is the remaining mirage of a lost desert... infew words big message to the world....excellent wrrite and deserves....10 read mine..... bidding farewell, inflamed mind. miss i miss u and mary to marry

Such a big meaning for such a little poem. 10+

brief words can say larger thoughts as this poem does

short but its a good write

brief bur clear..beautiful poem..grace

Excellent 10+

indeed life is a mirage for the earth....wonderful haiku..10++

As Sathya has put it, very philosophical and to be pondered strongly...nice

Very philosophical. Good one Sir.

I write haiku too.Isn't it amazing how much can be said in so few words? A ten from me.

profound thoughts, fine haiku written...Thanks! 10++

good haiku...much meaning inside

quite meaningful as we move towards finale, great write, ,10+, thanks