Monday, December 6, 2010

A Minute With God Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tears roll down my face, there's no where I can turn,
After all the hurt and pain, now my lesson I will learn,
How could you believe in me? , when I cursed you in my head,
After I prayed to you for nights, only in hopes of being dead,
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2017

I look up into the sky, one minute is all we ever had, All we ever needed, to change my thoughts of being dead, a real poem of hope in the midst of struggle. a wonderful spiritual poem. thank you dear poetess.

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Arianna Franco 18 July 2012

I read your poem Do Me before I read this one. I have to say that I was shocked they were written by the same person. That fact aside, you are very talented and possibly one of my favorite modern poets. God bless, Hayden

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Sharon Smith 07 May 2012

Beautiful! ! I think you might like 'A Wonderous Moment With You..'. If you get a minute, check it out..along the same idea. I think this one is so nice! ! Well done and thankyou! ! Regards...Sharon.

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Starr Mailangi 22 March 2011

i really love this poem; it was soo touchinq; =]

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