A Miner's Legacy Comments

Such a touching story Andrew, excellent narration...10++

Unusual poem for you Andrew, lovely storyline and very well written. I was wanting to rhyme at the end of each verse, but eventually got used to the format. Nice one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Moving life story, Andrew...sweet flowing narration...good work...thanks...10

Such a bitter-sweet tale, Andrew - and told with great musicality and graceful words. The story rollicks along, with the irresistible beat of the ballad (though you have chosen to divide it into eight line stanzas) . I particularly liked your reference to the son talking to his mother's empty chair. Jerry tells me that in freemasonry there is a very moving ceremony called the 'vacant chair'. Great write. Great writer. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A poignant story. It is always reassuring to know that it gets better farther on.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

A sad tale Andy, written so poignantly, together in life and joined in death, a heart rending piece, 10 Lynda xx

Such a touching write Andrew. The love they had together, so strong and and connected. You lead me along and entranced me from beginning to end. Great work. top marks! Karin Anderson

Hi Andrew! A mesmerizing write start to finish, goes to show me your poetry is stunning in any style you write in! ! Rock solid penning here! ! *10plus*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

What a life it is! It is a different kind of poem from you. Something strange and new! A mysterious kind of theme!