Wednesday, October 26, 2011

A Minefield Of Thoughts Comments

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Thoughts burst upon us,
Like some interactive soot ‘em game,
Sometimes villains,
Sometimes good guys,
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Daniel P Martin
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Shadow Girl 30 November 2011

Wow my 80's buddy! ! ! this is one of your best...loved it..so metaphorical and great personification...very thought provoking and relatable. FANTASTIC -SG

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 November 2011

Wow! A good piece of writing.

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Jacqui Broad 02 November 2011

You've once explained this poem to me brilliantly. Upon reading it again, I see now what you mean. This poem led me to write another, it started as a haiku. The thing of thinking is, you can always think what others may not know.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 November 2011

Interesting reading. If you have the time read 'Imagine'.Thankyou.

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