Tuesday, April 15, 2008

A Mind That Is Alive Comments

Rating: 4.1

It has been hindered by you.
Splintered.
And the spirits are here to mend.
Everything about it will be tossed on its end.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 June 2010

Master Mind…watcher and feeler of every thing…but we idiots fail to give recognition to it… And you can bet it will be done! ’ yea…ditto to it… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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A very nice piece awaken my mind. best regards, joan d.h.

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Kesav Easwaran 21 July 2008

true words...a mind that is alive is watching...patience need not have a 'heavenly' limit...be all it may earthy... enchanting write 10

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

a beautiful poem, mind stirring

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Duncan Wyllie 27 April 2008

I think that we are taking poetry to step two, the looking beyond our present state All can be such healing Lawrence, , , Thankyou Love duncan X

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Ivan Donn Carswell 15 April 2008

Thank you for expressing an idea of a conscious entity which tolerates us. If it writes poetry I will be fulfilled.... Rgds, Ivan

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