Saturday, September 5, 2009

A Mind Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

in your being there
every thing seems perfect
the days glides by,
like the dreams
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ritty patnaik
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Jean Dament 31 December 2009

A sweet & heartfelt expression of love shows in this lovel poem of yours. Thanks for sharing. 'in there wings'-should be 'in their wings' 'expance'-should be 'expanse' ok Spiritsong

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Nalini Hebbar 12 October 2009

a very sweet love song...a long marriage can do this to a couple...can't stay a moment without the other...loved it

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 14 September 2009

simple and beautiful poem, ma'am. expressive and emotional diction. wonderful. thank you.

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Ejaz Khan 05 September 2009

A brautiful write, Ritty! ! ! ! !

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