Monday, August 28, 2006

A Mind Explosion! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Me Mistress has made the call
an' I must answer her need
a game of silly entrapment
as slowly I caress every key
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Geoff Warden
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Chitra - 12 July 2008

nice work, fine flow of words

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Daffodil Decarie 28 October 2007

Are you trying to say, that your mistress nag is more important that what your readers (fans) has to say... in admiring your art? heh. Fine then. What a lucky mistress: D

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Marcia Morris 30 July 2007

Another great write. Nicely done. You said so much but in a tasteful manner. Keep writing!

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Beautiful write Geoff! A romance poem that says so much...but tastefully! ((smile)) Great job once again on another wonderful piece of poetry....Great title and imagery. U R so good at this....keep it up ='} =Shelley=

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Andie D 13 January 2007

Mistresses are extremely powerful... as i need not tell you geoff... x

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Original Unknown Girl 10 November 2006

Like the closing lines of this Geoff, echoed on pages forevermore. That's the beauty of poetry, it captures every thought, good or bad, one only has to read this and know what you're thinking! Great write. HG: -)

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Ruby Root 07 September 2006

Hi Geoff, Very different poem. Maybe she doesn't understand you. Maybe you should speak it out with her. I guess I am not one to give advice right now. Take care Excellent Poem.

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Patricia Gale 01 September 2006

Mind and body explosion should be the title! Splendid!

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Geoff Warden

Geoff Warden

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