A Mind Explosion! ! ! Comments

nice work, fine flow of words

Are you trying to say, that your mistress nag is more important that what your readers (fans) has to say... in admiring your art? heh. Fine then. What a lucky mistress: D

Another great write. Nicely done. You said so much but in a tasteful manner. Keep writing!

Beautiful write Geoff! A romance poem that says so much...but tastefully! ((smile)) Great job once again on another wonderful piece of poetry....Great title and imagery. U R so good at this....keep it up ='} =Shelley=

Mistresses are extremely powerful... as i need not tell you geoff... x

Like the closing lines of this Geoff, echoed on pages forevermore. That's the beauty of poetry, it captures every thought, good or bad, one only has to read this and know what you're thinking! Great write. HG: -)

Hi Geoff, Very different poem. Maybe she doesn't understand you. Maybe you should speak it out with her. I guess I am not one to give advice right now. Take care Excellent Poem.

Mind and body explosion should be the title! Splendid!