without knowing
who i am
without knowing
my role here
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An exceptionally well percieved thought...last lines are excellent! ! ! ! ! !
mind not mindful of all it has done of battles it has lost of smiles it has won this is a wonderful poem, sweet subtle and powerful...please read my poem called MIND'S A PARACHUTE - II
This goo sir.... You take a broad theme and express yourself in the most poetic manner... Nicely penned indeed /...10+++ cheers shan
A poem with facts Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing with me
It is a truth that a restless, fearful and anxious mind cannot present a sound body. A body at rest and in easiness can present a calm, poised mind. Our rishis were remarkable in their mental posture and we forget that they were in long penance within the stillness of body. For years together, they did not move an inch with their body. If they could not bring their bodies within this limit, they could never have had this mental concentration. Watch our people around us. Wherever they are restless in their bodies, to that extend, their mental stillness also get affected. Body requirement is most to get a good mental posture.
sam! this is very beautifully written and so much truth to it. 10 10
the lonliness of the soul stay always despite filling others needs. heartfelt poem
samanyan, It's nice....Beautiful reminders...10... / Thank you.../ All best... Tsira
body- a natural animal mind - a human in the making to find the soul A complete story in itself. CP
A poem with a lot of depth and truth Samanyan....Yes it is the mind only that torments us -and ultimately controls the body
'a lighted poem in the dark'...so dear awesome memories of the heart... so enigmatic feature in romantic of poetry....God bless....a 10 +