A Million Years To Sunday Comments
I hold you close and lay your head upon my chest
I kiss your soft and pale cheek and whisper
“shhh little Dove, rest”
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Complete as well now (that you've retyped) . As I said, a moving and good poem. Paul.
A moving poem Jim, well written. Just check line 2 - suggest change 'you' to your', and line 13 - change 'shinning' to 'shining'. Cheers. Paul.
Interesting... sounds you know something the other person doesn't.... let them wait till Sunday, then... what if assumptions are wrong?
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7/24/2025 1:02:59 PM # 1.0.0
Great title, great poem. Enjoyed reading this. HG: -) xx