I hold you close and lay your head upon my chest
I kiss your soft and pale cheek and whisper
“shhh little Dove, rest”
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Complete as well now (that you've retyped) . As I said, a moving and good poem. Paul.
A moving poem Jim, well written. Just check line 2 - suggest change 'you' to your', and line 13 - change 'shinning' to 'shining'. Cheers. Paul.
Interesting... sounds you know something the other person doesn't.... let them wait till Sunday, then... what if assumptions are wrong?
Great title, great poem. Enjoyed reading this. HG: -) xx