Tuesday, May 5, 2009

A Million Lives In Parallel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wide awake yet unaware,
Of all that lies around,
Stumble fall and tumble,
And lie there on the ground.
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Heath Gunn
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Tracy Da Santos 13 May 2009

I think your poem is beautiful

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 May 2009

'How each one has their issues, a set of unique trials to make ends meet, some sell their souls whilest others walk for miles' PURE CLASSIC WRITING........FROM A YOUNG MAN! ! ! ! Extraoridinary poetry. Thank God I know you now.

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Heath Gunn

Heath Gunn

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