Wednesday, February 5, 2014

A Million Kisses For Youuu Comments

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the moon rises so very high
with dreams flying away
like a kiss blown in the wind
on a warm summer's night
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Fuck me 18 April 2022

I love fricking my computer when I'm lonely with 7 whores watching me thank you for this peace of me in my Hooke.

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Nayanika Dey 25 June 2017

i have only one lifetime… only one life to share with you if anywhere i could be i would choose to be with you if a million wishes i have i would give them all to you and if a million kisses i have i would save them all for you These lines are just amazing! so full of love and affection.

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Tirtho Banerjee 02 July 2016

Superb. Simple and sweet

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Yan Feng 08 February 2016

The frist paragraph is very beautiful,use different painting scenery 。whole poem let us felt comfortable。 at last show the feeling, good idea! i like it!

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2016

Opening lines are awesome, free and fine flow......Superb...10++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 January 2016

how i wish i knew you no one kisses me too as my mouth stinks and am toothless my spouse fears gums disease so she feels So I kiss all my fans through the medium of Internet come and enjoy with me kisses i give for free don't worry I love French and whilst others read this piece I assure you all over you will be wet as others await a kiss or two o not from me but yu so i kiss you good bye ere my kisses fly high up in the sky as the autumn leaves have said goodbye never mind there is still a leaf or two waiting to carry my kiss up to you But to my spouse I am grateful I have turned a world poet all read my kisses poem and fly kisses to me how they wish i was with them so silently they sigh o poet when yo come do say hi and kiss me a lullaby INSPIRED BY UR POETRY DO READ MINE TOO THANK YOU

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Terry Craddock 29 December 2015

Moon Rapture Kisses Enslave Lovers on a hot summer night with stars twinkling seems the perfect time to chase a million romantic kisses to sweet summer love locations love kisses flesh mind inflame moon rapture kisses enslave lovers Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'A Million Kisses For Youuu' by the poet Sunprincess. Dedicated to the poet Sunprincess.

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Terry Craddock 17 December 2015

'the moon rises so very high with dreams flying away like a kiss blown in the wind on a warm summer night' on a hot summer night with stars twinkling, seems the perfect time to chase kisses, to a million romantic sweet summer love locations

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Kim Barney 13 December 2015

I'm still waiting for my million kisses...

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Gary H 14 October 2015

Short sweet and good as always :)

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Sofia Kioroglou 19 September 2015

lovely poem dear! Well-penned!

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Kim Barney 13 August 2015

Wow! A million kisses just for me! Sounds exciting. I hope my wife doesn't find out...

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Sylvia Chidi 02 August 2015

Excellent poem. Well composed and what a lovely flow.

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Chinedu Dike 01 January 2015

A well articulated train of thoughts, nicely encapsulated into a beautiful love poem. Very romantic indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Charity Nduhiu 30 October 2014

If a million kisses i have i would save them all for you this could be the happiest moment of life. Sweet poem

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G Sweeney 03 August 2014

beautiful imagery! ! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2014

Loved this lovely poem. It's so sweet and passionate! The last stanza is the sweetest of all! I wonder how many years it would take for your guy to receive and respond to your 'million kisses'!

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Mazhari David 21 May 2014

Only one lifetime, dear Rachel... but fear and walls all around... walls made of words... silly locked in human beings* *...

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Daniel Brick 18 May 2014

Your poem expresses the wonderful hyperbole of human love. Do you know the term HYPERBOLE? It's another word for exaggeration, but specifically the literary use of exaggeration for effect. This means the writer is targeting it, and not just gushing. Within the structure of your line stanzas you used the right amount of - hyperbole to prove the point of runaway desire. (That's the former English teacher in me - but I was ALWAYS excited to learn about literary techniques and then use them in my writing. You too!)

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Georgios Venetopoulos 05 May 2014

:) Yes. Very very beautiful. We are all thankful to you! :)

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