Saturday, January 3, 2015

A Milestone To Travel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a raindrop crosses the crossword of air
Humiliated by the pollutants and poisonous wear
It still splits its magical mesmerizing beauty of which you are well aware
You have a milestone to travel my dear!
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Nishi Kumari
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Thanks. 29 September 2018

I am so proud of the strength you've shown me. What it means to continue on despite the many obstacles that has come across your wayI cannot possibly imagine the pain you yourself have endured over the years but know that you are never alone or won't have to be anymore. I appreciate you and all you did for me. Don't ever stop fighting for what you believe in baby girl.

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Salaj Kumar 11 June 2016

Nice written, I wish her to improve your writting skills. Nice motivation poem. keep it up.

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 January 2015

un cuore pieno di dolcezza che sa confortare e spronare insieme a heart full of sweetness that knows how to comfort and encourage.. Nice lyrics, Nishi

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Muhammad Farhan Ahmed 03 January 2015

Just like Tabish said, it's a beautifully penned poem. Keep writing!

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Tabish Raza 03 January 2015

i hope it must have worked for your friend. a beautiful and motivational piece. all the similes are awesome.

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