Sunday, October 30, 2011

A Mile Of Millions Comments

Rating: 5.0

A mile of millions seperates our bodies,
yet when I think of you,
I can feel your warmth...
I can feel the gentle beat of your beautiful heart,
...
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Crimson Love
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Adeline Foster 01 February 2014

Great poem. But, should the last line not say 'A piece of my heart's: -) Still, Well done. Read mine - Despair. Adeline

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Liz Bitelove 10 November 2011

Hey..this is dear to my heart for i have a heart's cry that i will not deny..we know that we have a piece of each others heart when we are apart. thanks..gonna fav this. :)

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Harindhar Reddy 06 November 2011

Harry and Garry! Larry and Mary read this death poetry of this tender heart poetess! It is a wonder with a thunder. Poems says dearest one is left to heaven abode yet lives in the heart of our fellow poetess heart..................Gordon Bennett! Truly an amazing poem with lot hidden melancholy....... Great! 10++++++++++++ Rating.

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Shadow Girl 31 October 2011

ohhh...sweet...liked this a lot....where's the one u were gonna write? ? ? ? ? ? ? LOL! ! ! xoxo

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Lenore Lee 30 October 2011

Gorgeous. I love this poem of loving someone afar. You have such a kind heart =)

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Alex Manson 30 October 2011

this is brilliant...i love it....aw, you wrote this for me? ? ? ? *big smiles* wow, i'm blown away, my darling...flattery abides in this heart, but yet so does your smile <3 <3 <3 <3

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