Monday, May 19, 2008

A Midsummer Day's Rain Comments

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It is the middle of May, and the parched earth
Induces people to pray for a much-needed dearth
Of ravages caused by the sun, and a little bit of rain
To calm their nerves, else they would turn insane
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RONY PATRA
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Dyuti Banerjee 30 August 2009

i LIKED it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! =])

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Sadiqullah Khan 22 May 2008

the monsoons in the plains, , , , , , so well depicted, , , i can smell the earth while it rains that way, ,

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Seema Chowdhury 22 May 2008

Hi Rony, this is an excellent poem.you have very nicely composed the verses and while reading these magical lines i felt some raindrops on my head too.... It felt as alive and real! ! ! keep up the good work. take care

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 21 May 2008

good one......rainy season stimulates many poets........

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Siliguri, West Bengal, India
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