Wednesday, October 24, 2007

A Meteor, Right? (Science Poem?) Comments

Rating: 5.0

if you look up at the sky's dark shore
and see the flash of a meteor,
and instead of fading, it seems more bright
you might soon be dead from a meteorite!
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Chuck Audette
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G. Akanji Olaniyi 06 January 2016

Good! ! ! I love science poems. Check out some of mine on my poem list!

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Smoky Hoss 02 October 2012

It takes a sharp mind to imagine such a sight! Great one!

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Danny Draper 14 July 2012

Very funny, great stuff. My good Sir, you underestimate me as one smart fella Because I have a good umbrella.

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Shadow Girl 13 May 2011

Comic genius! LOVE it! I've got to read some more of your work! Glad i started on this one - hilarious!

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Gone Away 04 March 2010

You are making me laugh! although I believe death by meteor is no laughing matter!

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Patti Masterman 22 October 2009

Science huh? LOL. I love the verses that your verses are the inspiration of.

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Shirley Woods 27 July 2009

Hi Chuck, Love your stuff - you obviously have a great sense of humour - my 16 year old son is a fan!

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Beth L Adams 21 December 2007

Cute, Chuck! I won't be viewing any stars for a long time; you never know. Well done with excellent wit as always! Christmas wishes, Beth

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Tom J. Mariani 05 November 2007

On 11-03 I wrote 'Like Shooting Stars.' Today I read this by you. Are we psychic, psycho or what. You don't have to hit me in the head before I see the light.

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Esther Leclerc 04 November 2007

My knees hurt from slapping them............ : ]! ! ! Est

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Gregory Gunn 02 November 2007

And if by chance, you're scientifically inclined, A telescope, binoculars Will magnify the jocular Results. Reality betrays the popular, Albeit, nerdish cosmic fascinations, And all those brain-stem machinations, With retinae detached, I'm blind.

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Carey Jobe 26 October 2007

I like your comment on 'Stellar Matter' much better than Mark Fry's. And speaking of getting 'fry'ed, here is my poetic response to your response to my poem. Out of the stars, blazing the night, falls Charles Audette’s “A Meteor, Right? ” I’m smoking—carbonized! —or worse struck dumb by this flaming lump of verse!

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

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